During the first pass on a draft, you notice a sentence is grammatically correct but its point is unclear. What should you do first?
6 Editing and Sentence Revision Online Quiz Questions
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Which revision turns the fragment “Because the bus was late.” into a complete sentence while preserving its meaning?
- A
Because the bus was late.
- B
We missed the start of the film.
- C
Because the bus was late, we missed the start of the film.
- D
The bus was late, because.
Which revision makes “The decision was made by the team to postpone the trip” clearer and less wordy without changing its meaning?
- A
The decision to postpone the trip was made by the team.
- B
The team decided to postpone the trip.
- C
A decision was made, and the trip was postponed by the team.
- D
The team made the decision that the trip should be postponed.
Select all sentences in which the comma use follows the rules described in the material.
- A
After we got home, Liam put his shoes near the heater.
- B
Maya checked the map, and she found the trail.
- C
The rain stopped, we went outside.
- D
My sister likes chopping vegetables, stirring the soup, and setting the table.
Select all practices that can help you find problems during revision and proofreading.
- A
Proofread for one kind of error at a time.
- B
Read aloud and revise places where you stumble or lose track of the meaning.
- C
Assume spell-check will catch every incorrect word choice.
- D
Check whether the main idea is clear and whether information is missing or repeated.
True or false: Spell-check may miss a correctly spelled word that is used in the wrong way, such as “their” when “there” is intended.
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True
- B
False
True or false: A comma alone is sufficient punctuation for joining two complete sentences.
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True
- B
False
What sentence-problem term describes “Maya checked the map, she found the trail”?
What writing term describes using matching grammatical forms for ideas in a series?
Complete the sentence with the verb that agrees with its subject: “The list of supplies on the desk.”
Complete the sentence with the conjunction that shows the disappointment was a consequence of the cancellation: “The game was canceled, we were disappointed.”
Revise “The decision was made by the team to postpone the trip” to make the actor and action clear and remove unnecessary words. Preserve the meaning.
Choose the sentence that corrects the word-choice error and preserves the intended meaning: “Your going to need their permission.”
- A
Your going to need their permission.
- B
Youre going to need their permission.
- C
You’re going to need their permission.
- D
You’re going to need there permission.
True or false: Reading a draft aloud can help a writer notice places where they stumble or lose track of the meaning.
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True
- B
False
Choose the sentence with correct subject–verb agreement.
- A
The list of supplies are on the desk.
- B
The list of supplies is on the desk.
- C
The list of supplies were on the desk.
- D
The list of supplies be on the desk.
A student is revising a sentence about visiting a museum yesterday. Which version uses the correct past-tense verb?
- A
Yesterday, we seen a robot that sorted blocks.
- B
Yesterday, we see a robot that sorted blocks.
- C
Yesterday, we saw a robot that sorted blocks.
- D
Yesterday, we seeing a robot that sorted blocks.
Choose the sentence punctuated correctly when an introductory dependent clause comes before the main clause.
- A
When the meeting ended we went outside.
- B
When the meeting ended, we went outside.
- C
When, the meeting ended we went outside.
- D
When the meeting, ended we went outside.
Which revision correctly joins the two complete thoughts in “The rain stopped we went outside”?
- A
The rain stopped we went outside.
- B
The rain stopped, we went outside.
- C
The rain stopped, so we went outside.
- D
The rain stopped because, we went outside.
What sentence-problem term describes “Because the bus was late” when it is written by itself?
Which proofreading method can help you notice places where you stumble or lose track of meaning?